Ms. Camo: Difference between revisions

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I shifted the language to be more formal, objective, and concise, while providing specific details about Ms. Camo's behavior and appearance.

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 == Behavior ==
-Usually seen by herself. She is seemingly polite to other cats and has not yet shown any signs of aggression.
+Ms. Camo is typically seen alone and demonstrates polite behavior towards other cats, with no observed signs of aggression.
 == Appearance ==
-Ms. Camo is a calico cat with an orange mouth, black nose, and a white stripe on her face. She has been described as 'fluffy, but not fluffier than Ms. Princess.'
+Ms. Camo is a calico cat with a cute orange chin and a black nose. She has a white stripe running down her face, and she's fluffy— but not quite as fluffy as Ms. Princess.
 == Sightings ==