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 == Appearance ==
-The Insatiable One is an has a primarily orange coat with lighter orange and white on the underside of his face and chest. He is recognizable as one of the few orange cats at the [[Happy Canteen]] to not have a noticeable pattern on his back.
+The Insatiable One has a primarily orange coat with lighter orange and white on the underside of his face and chest. He is recognizable as one of the few orange cats in the [[Happy Canteen]] to not have a noticeable pattern on his back.
-Sometimes mistaken for [[Goobert]], the main distinction is Goobert’s white strip along his chest, which TIO lacks.
+He is sometimes mistaken for [[Goobert]], who has a distinguishable white strip along his chest that TIO lacks.
 == Sightings ==