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 *'''July 1, 2024:''' At 11:18 PM, Mr. Sweetpea approached [[Mr. Simba]] at the feeder. Mr. Simba kindly allowed Mr. Sweetpea to eat first. After eating, Mr. Simba and Mr. Sweetpea chilled on the wall for a while, although Mr. Sweetpea looked rather shocked. When Mr. Simba went to eat, Mr. Sweetpea swatted at him unnecessarily. He left after, only to come back after Mr. Simba had finished eating. Once having more food, Mr. Sweetpea left at 11:46 PM.
 *'''July 2, 2024:'''
-**At around ‏‎1:47 PM (CET), Mr. Sweetpea was eating calmly, and after finishing his meal, a random dog approached the feeder, ate out all of the remaining snacks, got scared by the feeder, and after finshing all the snacks again, Mr. Sweetpea came back to a sadly empty feeder.
+**At around ‏‎7:47 PM (LFT), Mr. Sweetpea was eating calmly, when after finishing his meal, a black dog approached the feeder. It ate out all of the remaining snacks. When more were dispensed, it came back. Eventually, Mr. Sweetpea came back to a sadly empty feeder.
-**Around 1:30 AM (LFT), Mr. Sweetpea approached the feeder once [[Ms. Exclamation Mark]] and [[Mr. Squeeze]] left. It He ate until 1:35 AM, when he left. He returned once more at 2:19 AM and 2:23 AM,
+**Around 1:30 AM (LFT), Mr. Sweetpea approached the feeder once [[Ms. Exclamation Mark]] and [[Mr. Squeeze]] left. He ate until 1:35 AM, when he left. He returned once more at 2:19 AM and 2:23 AM.
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