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 == Behavior ==
-Brother Valentine is quite bold, completely unbothered by the presence of other cats. He is known for his mellow demeanor. When other cats smell him, they draw back and sometimes run away—perhaps because his aura exudes such strong aura that it's overwhelming to be in his presence.
+Brother Valentine is quite bold and completely unbothered by other cats. He is known for his mellow demeanor. When other cats smell him, they draw back and sometimes run away—perhaps because his aura exudes such strong energy that it's overwhelming to be in his presence.
 == Appearance ==